I laugh to myself while hiding behind a tree. My mom was starting to get really pushy about spending time with Rob. She thinks that we will grow up to be married. I am twelve. I just want to hang out and have fun. Not to mention boys are super gross.
"Fine. Don't come out let the fairies eat you!" My mother hollered. "Dinner will be at seven-thirty if you are still interested Em. Be home before dark."
I cannot believe she is letting me stay out here! I jump for joy and run off to explore the forest. I come across a grove of pine trees and look around. The trees are old and rather large. If me and Rob put our hands around the tree and tried to hold hands, we wouldn't be able to even touch each others fingers. I turn around and see a strange boy. Stranger than most boys I mean. He was dressed in leaves from the forest, he had a headdress made of branches, and his eyes were as green as the pine trees. After a couple moments I realize I have been staring at the boy. I compose myself and say, "Hello. My name is Emily." His green eyes pierce my own as he replies, "My name is Evergreen."
I had to control myself from laughing. Evergreen? What kind of a name is that? However, as I look at him, the name seems to fit him. Definitely doesn't look like a "Craig" or a "Drew." He smiles and says "Wanna see something?" Evergreen takes me to a clearing and tells me to look up. There were so many lights. At first I thought it was the stars, then I realized it was a bunch of fairies. They were lighting up the sky as they flew from place to place. Evergreen had taken me to the home of the fairies. Before I could process everything, he grabs me by the waist and flew to a nearby home. I definitely had not seen any wings when I first saw him. I do not necessarily want to know where they came from either. We spent the rest of the evening in his house playing different games. Fairies play a lot of the same games we do, but they like a lot of nature themed games. For instance, a game of memory was not pictures. They had different bowls covering different types of plants and you had to be able to identify them in order to get a match. Before I knew it, I had to leave for dinner.
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Author's Note: This story was based off of the Fairy Bride story from the American Indian Fairytale unit. In the beginning of the story, it says that Neen-i-zu's (my Emily) mother was very concerned that she was spending so much time wandering off by herself. I thought I would take that part and expand upon it. I wanted to know exactly what Neen-i-zu had been doing, so I created a place where she would go spend time with the fairies. I chose for her to meet Evergreen because she marries him at the end of the story. I thought it would be cute if they were childhood friends.
Bibliography: The Fairy Bride from American Indian Fairy Tales by W.T. Larned with illustrations by John Rae (1921).
Chelsey, your retelling was really imaginative! I liked that you allowed Emily to have a magical encounter with Evergreen and be swept away to the land of fairies. What little kid wouldn’t want to do that? I also enjoyed the picture you selected for your story. I’m not sure what a fairy world would look like that…but maybe that’s representative!
ReplyDeleteChelsey, I actually read this unit! In fact, I almost chose this particular story for my storytelling post! I love the changes you made to the story, elaborating more on Neen-i-zu's time away. I love how you chose to tell the story in Emily's perspective, I think it made the story come to life a bit more. I also think you did an excellent job with the dialogue! In addition, you picture used to represent the story was perfect! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you retold this story! I think it is so interesting to talk about fairies! I like how you decided to add in a direct place where the fair took Emily off to. I think it strengthens your overall plot. I love how she was so mesmerized by Evergreen but she trusted him right away. Overall great job, and I look forward to reading more from you!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a creative and fun story! I was surprised to see how much of this story was your original creation when reading the authors note. I have to say, I was a little worried at first that the fairies might eat her as her mother had warned. I'm glad that these fairies are a little bit nicer than that!
Chelsey,
ReplyDeleteI really like Emily’s character in this! She reminds me of all the little girls that age who think boys are just icky and they just want to enjoy themselves. I actually like the name Evergreen! It is funny her mom told her not to get in trouble with fairies and she still ends up there! I bet it would be a lot of fun to be in her shoes.