Stanley the Stag was a great deer. He was one of the best deer you would ever meet. However, he could be more than a little vain at times. Stanley's pride and joy was his antlers. He was the envy of every stag in the forest. Everyone wanted antlers like him. Stanley would spend hours in the morning making sure they looked perfect for all of the does in town. His antlers resembled branches extending from a tree and they had over twenty points on them. With all the attention he received, it was no surprise that he had such an enlarged ego. However, he was insecure with his legs. Stanley had high and unrealistic expectations of how he should look. He insisted that if his antlers were indeed flawless, then he could perfect the rest of him as well. He was always looking at deer fashion magazines. He tried all the best leg workout on the web, but, he could not get his legs to look the way he wanted. So Stanley did the only thing he could think of and had surgery on his legs to make them immaculate. Although Stanley had the legs of his dreams, the surgery left him very weak. He could hardly stand and was told by his doctor to not participate in a lot of physical activity. The next day Stanley went to his groomer, Panther. Panther hated Stanley and his perfect antlers. While he was trimming around Stanley's antlers Panther cut a little too close and chopped off the left antler. With a quick smile, and only a second of hesitation, Panther cut off the right antler too. After realizing what had happened, Stanley went completely insane with grief over his lost antlers and ran toward the forest. While he was running, however, Stanley's new legs failed him. He fell into a cave waking a very angry bear and was never seen again.
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| Red Deer Stag by Bill Ebbesen transferred from Wikimedia Commons |
Author's Note: The original fable "The Stag and His Reflection" can be found in The Aesop for Children with pictures by Milo Winter. The original story is about a stag that is looking at his reflection in the water and is admiring his antlers. He also notices his legs and is ashamed of them. The stag then notices a panther and runs for it. However, his antlers get caught and the panther killed him. The thing he admired most about himself ended up being the stag's downfall and what he despised was more useful to survival. In my version, I concentrated more on the vanity of the stag and how it became his downfall.
Bibliography: "The Stag and His Reflection" from Aesop's Fables written by Aesop and illustrated by Milo Winter (2006). Web Source: Project Gutenberg
Bibliography: "The Stag and His Reflection" from Aesop's Fables written by Aesop and illustrated by Milo Winter (2006). Web Source: Project Gutenberg
I actually really liked this story because it had a really good lesson. I think you did a good job in changing the story because you elaborated on the legs that the stag despised. You definitely made the story more modern because you talked about magazines and the internet within the story. Overall, I think you did a great job in making this story your own, but still keeping all of the main points from the original story. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI appreciated the modern twist you put on this story. You talked about Stanley being caught up in the images he saw in the media, and I think these too-perfect images we are constantly opposed to could be a potential downfall for anybody! This obsession led him to a cosmetic surgery that actually hurt rather than helped him, which is something we see all too often in the world today.
ReplyDeleteThe way you altered the end of the story was very clever. It not only taught the lesson of vanity being ones down fall, but you even threw in a tiny bit of jealousy. The part when you mention that he was always looking at fashion magazines cracked me up. Your creative mind really shows through in this piece. Great work!
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